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Codeword Repetition
Way earlier in the sequences between kisses now no one can clearly recall the colour of silence before the alphabets intersected A long ways toward the end, in fact the last words to the last of the last it will … Continue reading
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Syntactical Tactics
The ending of “Not Without” in Mark Doty’s Deep Lane stretches the word order so that the reader is invited to linger and puzzle over the word order and the linkages between the elements. Even that. Endless gratitude, for the … Continue reading
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Two Portraits From Miller
George Miller. 30 (some odd) poems. Toronto: Three Tree Press, 1977. “Padraig O’Broin” […] In the tundra between the lines we eye each other guardedly “John of Glasgow” […] There is still among the dying more life than among the … Continue reading
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Even A Few More From Miller
George Miller. 30 (some odd) poems. Toronto: Three Tree Press, 1977. Conclusion to “Gambit” […] He practised madness in front of his mirror and when the mirror broke he found he had perfected it. A male version of “The Lady … Continue reading
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A Few More From Miller
George Miller. 30 (some odd) poems. Toronto: Three Tree Press, 1977. “Back to Back — LSD” […] A flower is a lesson in celestial geometry I smell its colour The flower and my vision of it cross-pollinate in an obscure … Continue reading
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Even More From Miller
George Miller. 30 (some odd) poems. Toronto: Three Tree Press, 1977. One of the thirty odd is a poem entitled “30th Birthday Testament” […] a gaggle of friends who rejected the dance in favour of learning how to limp […] … Continue reading
More From Miller
George Miller. 30 (some odd) poems. Toronto: Three Tree Press, 1977. Has the most glorious cover: a cheque (remember those?) made out to “whomever” is written out in the currency of “poems” in the amount of 30 (some odd) signed … Continue reading
The Insanity of Poetry
From the Republic of Childhood, a tool? a weapon? a field? We call these children’s games, not children’s work, but isn’t a child precisely one who doesn’t yet observe a clear distinction between what counts as labor and what counts … Continue reading
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Finding Place Finding Story
I am intrigued by the progression. A skip to the past (the boy he was) to traverse some fiction production (the lives of the strangers) to land in the present (place). It seems as if the boy himself is a … Continue reading
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Morphemes Metastasize
pages and pages apart is found a description to describe language under pressure The wire, the wire, the why are, the why are. The why are we here? Listen there was time. which instantiates what our poet earlier expressed in … Continue reading
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