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Uncoupling Suffocation
Parked in a car looking out on a body of water. A man and a woman think back. Well one of them thinks. ‘Remember,’ he says, ‘we’d walk by this lake in the evenings, when we were first married.’ The … Continue reading
Past Smoldering
My paternal grandfather smoked a pipe. Perhaps this is why the empty bowl leaves a trace in my mind of a clear image of not only emptiness but coolness as well as the lingering aroma. We take the poem beyond … Continue reading
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Sunwards Sandwards
Concurrent reading makes certain passages glow more. Take for example Stewart Brand’s The Clock of the Long Now: Time and Responsibility (advertised on its cover as “The Ideas Behind the World’s Slowest Computer”) still fresh in mind when encountering these … Continue reading
ZZZ
I Anne Carson Ode to Sleep Decreation The poem describes sleep as a “slab of outlaw time punctuating every pillow”. II John Keats To Sleep O soft embalmer of the still midnight, […] Upon my pillow, breeding many woes,— Save … Continue reading
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Wine and Bread
At first you have erotic flush, followed by lassitude but with a twist towards the celebration of the long-lived. A Decade When you came, you were like red wine and honey, And the taste of you burnt my mouth with … Continue reading
Syntactic Presumptions
Keith Garebian in the introduction Wild Grass Moon Moon on Wild Grasses bemoans the limit-introducing limitations of the English language: It is difficult for English haiku to have kireji (cutting words), small but powerful linguistic units that indicate a pause … Continue reading
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A Shiver of Memory
Documenting a hole of personality. Sam Hamill The Infinite Moment: Poems from Ancient Greek No charm, all looks: she pleases but cannot hold — she floats like bait without the hook. Kapitonos Centuries later another documenting of domestic doom. Paulette … Continue reading
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Song and Scent
I came upon this little booklet of verse and aphorisms at a book sale and its cover and place of publication intrigued me. Branches of Jasmine (which will grow and bloom on the West Coast) published in 1939 in Vancouver … Continue reading
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Fish Man Air
The opening two lines of “Ghost of a Chance” are set off in a stanza. You see a man trying to think. The poem urges the granting of breathing space but observes the old consolations will get him at last … Continue reading
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Dog Gone Bow Wow
Repetition of variants as means of construction. Rift on Riffaterre According to Michael Riffaterre, the poetic text is structured in such a way that it repeats many variants of the same invariant. This invariant is the semantic nucleus of the … Continue reading
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