Word Book World Back

It was originally published under the title Triton. Wesleyan University Press reissued it under the title Trouble on Triton with a forward by Kathy Acker who introduces the reader to the intricacies of Samuel Delany’s prose by way of an extended meditation on the magical aspect of Orphic traversals.

For the poet, the world is word. Words. Not that precisely. Precisely: the world and words fuck each other.

Not it should be noted fuck each other up. The mode here is the copulatory. Not per se combat.

Further on she places into this mix of merging the active role of the reader.

Every book, remember, is dead until a reader activates it by reading. Every time that you read, you are walking among the dead, and, if you are listening, you just might hear prophecies. Aeneas did. Odysseus did. Listen to Delany, a prophet.

And we find in the second appendix devoted to “Ashima Slade and the Harbin-Y Lecures”, Delany delivering a succinct exposition of how world and word hook up.

There are situations in the world. And there are words — which are, to put it circularly, what we use to talk about them with. What makes it circular is that the existence of words, and their relationship to meanings, and the interrelationships among them all, are also situations. When we talk about how words do what they do, we are apt to get into trouble because we are maneuvering through a complex house of mirrors, and there is almost no way to avoid that trouble, short of resorting to pictures — which I am not above doing.

When there is trouble on Triton. SNAFU. Resort to pictures. (My first reading of the paragraph above treated the last phrase as declarative i.e. that in the above paragraph our author was not resorting to pictures; now, I see that the author is announcing what is to follow — the use of pictures. Still I’m iffy about the line between “picture” and “word” since both can through different modulations result in “images”.)

And so for day 1112
29.12.2009

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Involution Not Equivalent to Self-Referentiality

I have a fondness for jokes that depend on going meta that is inquiring about the frame of reference to make their point. For instance, Brian Basset in this 1996 three panel cartoon (Adam) brings a smile by having one of the characters adeptly query parental logic.

Frame 1
Father: Clayton, you know the rule. No television until you’ve finished your homework.
Clayton: But aren’t rules made to be broken?

Frame 2
No. Records are made to be broken.

Frame 3
Okay, what’s the record for the most rules ever broken?

What is endearing in the illustration is that from frame to frame the focus zeros in on the wide-eyed face of the child — gone is the television; it’s all cerebral by the end.

And so for day 1111
28.12.2009

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Product Placement

The Bad Sequence by Phil Hall published by Book Thug in 2004 and reprinted in 2007 is built out of a series of repetitions (The Bad Sequence is… The Bad Sequence does…) with one eye-catching exception:

Priests are torturing The Good Sequence. Apparently there are laws against removing the ghosts of history and story from dictionaries. Meanwhile, Sunlight‘s unflappable surrealism measures and swabs the room.

Some may think of Sunlight as dishwashing liquid. It first appeared in 1884 as a brand of soap for washing clothes and general household use. And what is it doing here in a segment of poem?

I venture an answer by way of Gerald L. Bruns “Karen Mac Cormack Among the Pagans” and my initial reading of “obsessive” for “objective” in the following passage:

Recourse to source texts or found language is a poetics that subjects the writing subject to an objective language (or linguistic field). It is a poetics of finitude […]

Bruns is here discussing the use of chance operations confined to a restricted source text. For my purposes, I would like to suggest how a brand name is a fragment of found language and how its placement in Hall’s sequence, so close to the mention of torture, reminds me of mouths washed out with soap and the surreal survival of poetry in quotidian lather of non sequiturs where the objective is obsessive.

And so for day 1110
27.12.2009

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Necklaces Neckless

Ceiling, we look up. Roof, we look down. Covering, either way. [in English]

Wait, wait a moment
for us to dry a moment
there’s in our trace
a reckless lament
    and a ceramic bird …
and watch for the necklaces on the ceiling

from “Wolves” in Ghassan Zaqtan Like a Straw Bird It Follows Me, and Other Poems translated by Fady Joudah.

As I watch for the necklaces on the ceiling I wonder if they lie flat defying gravity or if they dangle in filaments. And the very last line of the book (“Only the jasmine continued its climb, its eyes on the ceiling”) takes me in another direction (in English) and makes be wonder if “ceiling” and “roof” are not covered by the same word in Arabic. Regardless I am at a loss for direction in a tumble of necklaces and jasmine.

And so for day 1109
26.12.2009

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Dead Men’s Fingers

In the midst of this reworking of the Kay and Gerda story (“The Snow Queen” by Hans Christian Andersen), Daphne Marlatt introduces a strong childhood memory which I share (I distinctly recall the sugary liquid followed by chewing the wax shell to a pale whiteness — very like the colour of dead men’s bones).

     She suggests I go to the cemetery with her, as a gesture, helping to dust rain-spatter off the artificial roses. & suddenly I taste grape soda fizz, from way back, from the black cat coffee shop. Remember those tiny wax urns with cordial inside? licour of dead men’s bones.

There is in the Vancouver archives a copy of a placement ( dated from 1960) featuring the image of a black cat in a top hat. Goes nicely with this segement from 1968 Frames by Marlatt. A cat in a top hat just as artificial as those roses touched by rain-splatter or as dead men’s bones — chewed.

And so for day 1108
25.12.2009

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On The Scent

Wickedly good.

If Earth Witch, rather than Earth Mother receives
the woman’s wound offering — and there is no
protection against this — the woman becomes more
and more driven with a Need. A Need. …
and sometimes leaves her family, her village and
roams the mountains, seeking Earth Witch.
She will take lovers and they might satisfy her flesh
but her spirit is always seeking
     Earth Witch does not intend to be cruel
     She does not enjoy your pain
     It is just … how she is …
     The opposite of Earth Mother …

Frankly sensuous.

Womanscent and womansalt and womanslick flesh against my lips, and all the mysteries explained, all the secrets open and inviting me to enter.

Anne Cameron. Earth Witch.

What is admirable here is the yoking of quest with eros. In a woman-identified perspective. Scent, salt and slick take on an added resonance with the prefix woman coming from a woman-identified stance (the poetic voice is strongly female). And a good dose of outlaw imagery provides a note of spiciness.

And so for day 1107
24.12.2009

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Polymorphous Aphorism

In one poem (“The Double-Goer”) Daryl Hine writes “Manifold are the disguises of our love.” That should prepare us for the intriguing passage in “Osiris Remembered”

     Once Orpheus had turned his back upon
     The saddest and the palest of shades
     And tuned his hymn of praise to the homosexual sun,
     He strolled amid the adolescent glades
     That moved beside the streams that ceased to run
     To music, Dionysus’ weakest reeds
Are women. Alas, with them have glades and music gone.

“Homosexual sun” was what caught my eye. And then the retreat from music and the going of the women behind that epithet of weakness. Music, women and even the glades where he walked are gone. Of course our singer is gone too. In legend’s lore those weak reeds spurned by the poet exact their wrath but Ovid’s descendant treats the reader to a freeze frame moment before the final demise.

The slant tone is caught again in “The Destruction of Sodom” which concludes in a turning-cheek invocation that asks for forgiveness but not deliverance.

Number your vices in imagination:
Would they teach whole cities of perversion?
Forgive us our bodies, forgive us our bodies’ uses.

The irony is relished when one retraces one’s steps and reads the beginning:

One would never suspect there were so many vices.
It is, I think, a tribute to the imagination
Of those who in these eminently destructible cities
Have made an exact science of perversion
That they, like us, limited by their bodies
Could put those bodies to such various uses.

And then there is the sauciness of the tenth of the “Fourteen Aphorisms in the Same Vein”

A definition of depravity:
What the imagination’s suavity
     Can devise
     Otherwise
Than the simple need to fill a cavity.

Audacious rhymes. Witty.

Daryl Hine. The Devil’s Picture Book (1960).

And so for day 1106
23.12.2009

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Reality Dissolves Imagination

I was first taken by how these two lines open a stanza some way through the first section of David McFadden‘s A New Romance.

Reality dissolves imagination,
dream seeks its own level

I was left with the impression of dream like water finding its place in the contour of a landscape. But the stanza continues and does so with a circularity that is constructed out of skilful use of conjunction and punctuation — the line endings do not end the thought or the image.

Reality dissolves imagination,
dream seeks its own level
in the grey dawn of awesome stillness
and the newness of a new romance
glowing with the skin’s electrical fire
in the dissolution of the imagination.

What edges towards burn (fire) retreats with the repetition of the dissolution of the imagination. The newness of the new allows the dream to find its own level in a circle that goes on and on — dissolving the ground of imagination.

And so for day 1105
22.12.2009

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Memory Rising

Mark Sinnett attentive to sensuality brings on layers memories. The child is never very far away from the appetites of the adult. Together they form a continuity that consumes the world with an avidity that results in acute observations. There is, for instance, an extended description of a partner making bread which culminates in the promise of an embrace imbued with aroma and attractiveness.

And when you do come up to me,
in the end, swinging your arms
in the room’s air
with a rough semaphore
that says you want me
to be proud of you,
pushing around the smells
of yeast, of baking, stirring them
about you until they are over me
like a blanket

There follows a fine observation about a trace of flour in the hair at the top of the spine and the next segment brings the memory which carries the conceit further and interestingly balances plural (marmalades) and singular savours (the butter).

and I lie there in the gusts
of memory brought on by your scent —
[…]
before I loose myself
from your body, untie
the knots we made

and turn instead to the bright
bitter marmalades I grew up with;
the soft, warm butter.

“Late Riser” in The Landing.

And so for day 1104
21.12.2009

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People Who

How do you represent an infinite space? You rift on a catalogue. Take two lines from a translation of Borges. Between the lines insert more lines as if the poem could go on and on. You have something like the poem by Steven Heighton collected in Patient Frame which ends in this conglomeration

Those who sit on front porches, not in fenced in privacy, in the
          erotic inaugural summer night steam.
Who redeem from neglect a gorgeous, long-orphaned word.
Who treat dogs with a sincere and comical diplomacy
Attempt to craft a decent wine in a desperate climate.
Clip the chin of consequence by letting others have the last word.
Master the banjo.
Are operatically loud in love.
These people, without knowing it, are saving the world

And there is on this second page of “Some Other Just Ones” following the words a panel of white space that offers the reader room to ruminate about saving the world and how many more just ones there may be.

And so for day 1103
20.12.2009

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