Enlightenment

Respect for fair use and copyright prevent me from quoting the poem in its entirety — at one run without interruption. An impulse to praise and its many virtues make me quote bit by bit with interspersed commentary. First off the title:

12. Enlightenment

It is the twelfth poem in the 99 collected by David W. McFadden under the title What’s the Score?. It is written in couplets. The first of the couplets presents a bald statement about the nature of hobbies and the subject’s time of life.

Gardening and photography, his hobbies
went together like old age and death.

From this laconic beginning, the reader moves to a bit of narrative about abandoning the implements of the vocation to a child described as “sticky-fingered” which leads one to believe the gift is a pre-empting of theft.

I understood when he grew tired and gave
his Leica to his sticky-fingered son.

Our narrator poet understands giving up on the future but is a bit flummoxed by the erasure of the marks of the past.

But when he committed to the flames his entire
collection of slides of glorious dahlias

Note here that the couplet doesn’t close off as do the preceding. It carries over, we expect something from this cremation.

that he’d cultivated over a lifetime
and flowers of all kinds from around the district

And as the sentences spill over the lines, the lifetime, a stretch in time becomes figured as an increasing distance from home and our subject’s glorious dahlias; the gardening interest grows a geographic spread.

or from botanical gardens around the world —
I looked into his eyes and asked him why.

The question is immediately answered:

“No one was interested.” Tears appeared.
This was in his early seventies.

The staccato of these short sentences offer a sharp contrast with the flow of the previous lines. Indeed in this poem, there is a constant erosion of the previous tempos and rhythms in a way that supplements the narrative undermining of closure. As expected the poem takes a new turn:

He had several years left of growing flowers
but they blossomed and faded unphotographable.

This is the end but note that the poet narrator doesn’t describe the flowers of this late blooming as “unphotographed” but as “unphotographable”. As if the capacity for image making itself was impaired. Furthermore this turn to the unphotographable blossoming and fading is ambiguous. It may be a loss for one of the hobbies we started out with is gone. It may signal an enriched appreciation for the one hobby that is left: gardening. One is not quite sure if the stress is on the fading or the growing. Just who is enlightened remains a mystery.

And so for day 1092
09.12.2009

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Dung and the Masses

Salman Rushdie’s narrator, Saleem, in Midnight’s Children is prone to reading history in associative terms and it is perhaps fitting that we hereby bring the final paragraph of the novel in close proximity to a scatological moment — an almost castaway waste of a moment — that occurs near the end…

Midnight, or thereabouts. A man carrying a folded (and intact) black umbrella walks towards my window from the direction of the railway tracks, stops, squats, shits. Then sees me silhouetted against light and, instead of taking offence at my voyeurism, calls: ‘Watch this!’ and proceeds to extrude the longest turd I have ever seen. ‘Fifteen inches!’ he calls, ‘How long can you make yours?’ Once, when I was more energetic, I would have wanted to tell his life-story; the hour, and his possession of an umbrella, would have been all the connections I needed to begin the process of weaving him into my life, and I have no doubt that I’d have finished by proving his indispensability to anyone who wishes to understand my life and benighted times; but now I’m disconnected, unplugged, with only epitaphs left to write. So, waving at the champion defecator, I call back: ‘Seven on a good day,’ and forget him.

Saleem may be modest about his production of shit but magnificent in the scope of multitudes that his writing pours out onto the page in those final epitaphs. He spirals off into the untold.

Yes, they will trample me underfoot, the numbers marching one two three, four hundred millions five hundred six, reducing me to specks of voiceless dust, just as, all in good time, they will trample my son who is not my son, and his son who will not be his, and his who will not be his, until the thousand and first generation, until a thousand and one midnights have bestowed their terrible gifts and a thousand and one children have died, because it is the privilege and the curse of midnight’s children to be both masters and victims of their times, to forsake privacy and be sucked into the annihilating whirlpool of the multitudes, and to be unable to live or die in peace.

Enormous. Flood of human essence. Appropriate for a novel where the principle interlocutor is called by our narrator his dung lotus, Padma. We as readers are still focalized by this one point, this interlocutor, but we are bereft of her response. Stuck. Having to refigure in a Saleem-like fashion the connections between the untold story of the one unabashed shit producer and the multitudes whose stories are foreshortened and come to figure a return of the same but not same sons which morph into the genderless children. Privacy is forsaken. Peace unattained.

And so for day 1091
08.12.2009

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The Mechanics of Sentiment

Mark Haddon has the autistic narrator of The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time meditate on the nature of computers and feelings.

Also people think they’re not computers because they have feelings and computers don’t have feelings. But feelings are just having a picture on the screen in your head of what is going to happen tomorrow or next year, or what might have happened instead of what did happen, and if it is a happy picture they smile and if it is a sad picture they cry.

Of course one is reminded of Wittgenstein and picture theory. What is interesting here is the need for temporal shift in order to produce emotion. There is as the French say a “décalage” necessary to the expression of emotion. Here Christopher, our narrator, introduces the process by picturing the future, followed by picturing of what might have been, followed by the experiencing of sad or happy pictures. Projection, counter-factual, emotion. All accomplished by a screen in the head.

And so for day 1090
07.12.2009

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Parentheses and Tables

BookThug has re-issued Karen Mac Cormack’s first book of poetry Nothing By Mouth. There one finds a segment of a sequence that stands alone as a statement.

details) sifting the desert
letters swirl
the grains ignite
in her eye (he never
noticed) green as oasis
palms burning (in the first place

I like how the tabular layout allows the reader to read down the columns and generate meaning that complements the line by line horizontal working through. Furthermore, the placement of the parentheses can lead to a story seized upon in media res [details)], elaborated with an enjambement [(he never / noticed)] and left in suspension [(in the first place]. And the poem segment gets typographically denser as the pace of parenthetical comment picks up [two in the last “couplet” versus one in line one for the first couplet and one in line two for the second couplet causing a sort of bunching]. And retroactively one has the sense that the “swirl” results from “burning”; one moves from effect to cause in a pleasurable narrative progression. And perhaps some of the friction came from his not noticing the grains in her eye or the palms burning — in either direction “he” doesn’t notice details that we as readers do but we are unable to burst through the parenthesis and address this him or caution her about the irritation of desert sand in the eye: all we carry away from the oasis is a vision of flame. (a conflagration

And so for day 1089
06.12.2009

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For Taking

Beside the non-fiction of The Evidence of Things Not Seen by James Baldwin one puts the short story by Toni Cade Bambara “Madame Bai and the Taking of Stone Mountain” in Deep Sightings & Rescue Missions. The title announces something as accomplished what the story hints as yet to come. Madame, the self-defence instructor, poses a series of questions and each of the questions initiates a description of the ruminations of the protagonist.

“One question, daughter.” Madame says it in English.

[…]

“Stone Mountain,” Madame says finally […]

The question is followed by a politicized description of the relief carved into a cliff (a relief depicting a tribute to Confederacy generals). The reader is made to understand the monument receives a particular meaning depending on one’s subject position (“Tourist trap entrapment of visiting schoolchildren lured under the spell of the enslavers of Africans and the killers of Amerinds, lewdly exposed mammoth granite rock of ages the good ole boys think they can hide in from history”) — it is all told with rather more urgency and finesse in the short story. The questions continue.

“What is it for?” Madame asks […]

There follows a piece of bravura writing where our protagonist in a series of truncated sentences is not only describing its function (“[t]o rally the good ole boys, to dispirit the young, to celebrate the.”) but also its destruction (“Five sticks of dynamite shoved in just so […] A people’s army could.”). It is an oratorical gesture that prepares Madame’s striking final words which end the story

“Stone Mountain is for taking,” she says.

Without quoting large swaths of the story, I do no justice to the intensity. I do want to be clear that the whole section of Madame’s apparently simple questions and the train of thought they provoke follows a very detailed description of how the authorities withdraw from investigating the murders of Black children (“Wholesale defection begins in June when the headlines around the country announce that the monster’s been nabbed. […] One man, two counts, and amnesia drifts in like fog to blanket the city.”)

Look up images of Stone Mountain. Read Bambara’s story. Understand Baldwin’s “virtuoso polemic” (Kirkus Review). And believe that changing culture is massive work. Good work. Ongoing work. Necessary work.

And so for day 1088
05.12.2009

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Antics in the Whorehouse

George Elliott Clarke. Execution Poems. “Haligonian Market Cry”.

The poem is structured as a succession of sexually suggestive cries flogging vegetables and fruit interspersed with snatches of non-English phrases. Abundance is celebrated by the English bits.

I got hallelujah watermellons — virginal pears — virtuous corn!

[…]

Come-and-get-it cucumbers — hot-to-trot, lust-fresh cucumbers!

And in between are the “foreign” bits

The motto of Nova Scotia: Munit haec et altera vincit!

The end of Lowry’s Under the Volcano with the key question (Do you destroy your children?) missing: Le gusta este jardin?

The best disco French: Voulez-vous coucher avec moi?

Italian whose source forsooth I have been unable to trace: O peccatore, in verità!

And finally some German that alludes to a scene in Joyce’s Ulysses where Bloom pays for a chandelier that Stephen smashes in a whorehouse: Die Reue ist doch nur ein leuchter Kauf!

You really should consult the whole thing to get a fulsome taste of this combination of market cries mixed with strange snippets of holy-roller praise interleaved with the “foreign” bits — it makes for a potent combination.

And so for day 1087
04.12.2009

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Pre-Camp

It was in reading Against Interpretation cover to cover in the order the essays appear instead of selectively in what ever order piqued my curiosity (I had years ago consulted the “Notes on Camp”) that I noticed that the end of the essay on Happenings made a beautiful introduction to the penultimate essay in the book “Notes on Camp” which originally appeared in the Partisan Review. So the juxtaposition of “Happening” ending and “Camp” beginning is an artefact of later placement. Yet how very telling that we leave off with a consideration of audience only to pick up a concern with sensibility.

Comedy is not any less comic because it is punitive. As in tragedy, every comedy needs a scapegoat, someone who will be punished and expelled from the social order represented mimetically in the spectacle. What goes on in the Happenings merely follows Artaud’s prescription for a spectacle that will eliminate the stage, that is, the distance between spectators and performers, and “will physically envelop the spectator.” In Happening this scapegoat is the audience [1962]

Susan Sontag provides here in “Happenings: an art of radical juxtaposition” a marvellous key to reading the difficult-to-describe sensibility of the 1964 “Notes on Camp”. There too audience plays a role:

The peculiar relation between Camp taste and homosexuality has to be explained. […] Jews and homosexuals are the outstanding creative minorities in contemporary urban culture. Creative, that is, in the truest sense: they are creators of sensibilities. The two pioneering forces of modern sensibility are Jewish moral seriousness and homosexual aestheticism and irony.

I am reminded of the comments years later by Fran Lebowitz on connoisseurship and the gay public of the New York City Ballet. Somehow along the way we have lost the scapegoat and the monopoly on camp or moral seriousness. Still worth remembering the history.

And so for day 1086
03.12.2009

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Pumped

In the perspective of an admitted “catharsis addict”.

Dirt is liquid. And writing and reading are a conduit for bodily fluids.

A book, like a TV, drains me of my wishes and fears. I hook myself up to the book — the book I’m reading, the book I’m writing — and out pour the fluids. I no longer want. Afterward, I feel sickened by my release, but also relieved; the toxins are gone, flushed out of my bloodstream. A book, for catharsis addicts, is a ritual chamber wherein we acknowledge that we are dirty and that we are capable of becoming clean.

This is section 3 of the “Catheter” fugue in Wayne Koestenbaum’s Humiliation. The whole mechanism depends on a “becoming clean” and raises the question of purity. Can we ever become toxin free? What of a metaphorics that views reading as ingestion? We can view cultural artefacts as osmotic membranes. They permit two-way traffic. Koestenbaum’s “I” acts out a theatre of humiliation in which he attempts to drag along the reader. But what if the reader believes that a pure state is impossible and that the reader is attuned to foreign bodies dancing in a dialogic soup of antibodies? Germ phobia is not universal. And so the dynamics of humiliation may have a more limited reach than observed by Koestenbaum’s “I”. And for anyone tempted to “go meta”, please note that it is not the case that exposure of faulty plumbing is humiliation; a catharsis addict and their ritual chamber may spring leaks; it is in the order of language and the physics of liquids for flows to disrupt machines.

And so for day 1085
02.12.2009

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Indifference

Thom Gunn Selected Poems 1950-1975 concludes with a poem chosen from Jack Straw’s Castle called “The Cherry Tree” which after description of the fecund abundance of the fruit-bearing tree moves to a description of its self-possession. The babies, i.e. cherries, have fattened. The gendered tree is not preoccupied with their fate.

Now she can repose a bit
they are so fat.
                     She cares less
birds get them, men
pick them, human children wear them
in pairs over their ears
she loses them all.
That’s why she made them,
to lose them into the world, she
returns to herself,
she rests, she doesn’t care.

She leans into the wind
her trunk shines black
with rain, she sleeps
as black and hard as lava.
She knows nothing about babies.

I think the strength of the image derives from the gendering and from the appeal to hardened lava: there is in the picture of this “return” something elemental. It places the reader in an interesting position: what are we to know of her unknowing? What are we to do with this knowledge? Turn too to forgetfulness… grow hard, shining in the rain. Can we cultivate such indifference? Find rest?

And so for day 1084
01.12.2009

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Trick of the Light

It is a poem ostensibly about deer feeding on roses. So you wonder how the ending came to be. How the lantern came to hold a place as an image for the house you grew up in.

And that which comes alight, the house you grew up in: sometimes it is a lantern small enough to carry before you in one hand.

We get to this ending after passing over some remarks on the beauty of the household versus the beauty of the field. And it seems with this lantern ending that the demarcation gives way. The light seems a thing of beauty belonging neither to household nor to field. And the question arises about who the light is for. Its illumination is limited by its size. This is not a beacon. It is akin to a spark. One recalls the story of the blind man given a lantern (see Paul Reps, Zen Flesh, Zen Bones). But there is no blind person here. No extinguished light. Just the miracle of metaphor whereby a whole house through imagination becomes palm-sized. All alit.

Hand. Lantern. House.

The poem is called “Folklore” and is collected in The Whole Night, Coming Home by Roo Borson.

And so for day 1083
30.11.2009

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